• samus12345@sh.itjust.works
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      10 hours ago

      The long shot at the end makes sense, but that tiny body floating above her hair in the third panel seems out of place.

    • GrantUsEyes@lemmy.zip
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      20 hours ago

      I think we are seeing the project in it’s early stages and the author has been experimenting with different things and finding their voice and style; there’s bound to be inconsistencies. They are clearly talented and are helping grow the community with original content so, major props to them! This comic even inspired me to give it a try and make my own… (Which I posted in other community 'cause it’s just basically fan art, but still :P)

      • Hjalmar@feddit.nu
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        11 hours ago

        Idono, I think this one is quite unique and interesting, if it’s just a choice they made I really like it